Reading and sketching…

I’ve been trying to read other M/M authors’ work to get an idea of what’s sellable in the gay community…and they are such crap I can’t finish them. Even when the storyline is interesting, the writing is so stiff or arch or at such a high-school level when it comes to characterization and situation, I get angry I’ve wasted my time and money.

Of course, that might be my problem. I write books that are rough and tumble and have real people in them in situations that are not always nice, proper, correct, decent. In The Vanishing of Owen Taylor, my MC, Jake, accuses a teenage boy who just lost his last surviving relative of having helped kill the guy, blurting this out before knowing it for certain, nearly crushing the kid. What’s positive about that hateful moment is, once Jake realizes his error, he makes the kid part of his pack and protects him like he would his own child…to the extent of hiding the boy’s participation in another death.

And Curt, the ex-con MC in How To Rape a Straight Guy, helps kidnap and brutalize an undercover cop, nearly destroying the man’s emotional stability…but saves the man’s life even though it means he’ll return to prison. And Devlin, the MC of Underground Guy, nearly gets himself killed trying to protect a British cop he raped. And Eric, the MC of Bobby Carapisi, brings on the suicide of another man by refusing to let go of how he was raped and the cops did nothing about it, not realizing what he’s done until it’s too late, so spends the rest of the book making up for it.

Maybe I should write books like Nicholas Sparks, albeit M/M instead of bland BS, all sweet and goupy with someone dying at the end to bring about a “life-lesson.” Or fake SM in a M/M vein, like those indescribable Gray’s books.

Or fuck it — I write what I fucking want to write and that is all there is to it.

Does this sound like a fun graphic novel to read if I make it detailed?

Mike’s Mistake:

  1. Mike’s at football practice, perfect quarterback, gorgeous team
  2. Mike and buddies shower, all goofy, naked, gorgeous
  3. Mike and team dress, all stages of naked and semi-clothed, gorgeous
  4. Mike goes to dorm, dressed in loose shorts and sleeveless t-shirt
  5. Mike enters room, greets roomie, gorgeous guy studying
  6. Mike checks baggie of pot — empty, roommate sees
  7. Roommate offers Mike a card with name and address — Charlie
  8. Mike head out, thumbs up to roommate
  9. Roommate looks at photo of Mike, smirks
  10. Mike drives to address, way out in countryside
  11. Mike parks, no other cars there
  12. Mike strolls up to the front door
  13. Mike knocks on door
  14. Charlie opens door, big, buff and gorgeous
  15. Mike holds up baggie and some money
  16. Charlie invites Mike in, smirking
  17. Mike enters to find two other guys there, getting dressed
  18. Guys surround Mike
  19. Charlie pulls Mike’s shirt up
  20. Guys help Charlie subdue Mike
    1. Mike’s hands tied behind back
    1. shirt ripped off
    1. shorts pulled down
    1. briefs torn away
    1. carried to bed
  21. Charlie force-kisses Mike
  22. First and Second Guys grope Mike
    1. fondle his dick
    1. grab his ass
    1. run hands over his legs
    1. suck on his nips
    1. suck on his balls
  23. First Guy sucks Mike’s dick as Second Guy fingers Mike’s ass
  24. Mike forced to suck Charlie’s dick
    1. mouth held open
    1. Charlie puts dick in
    1. Charlie cums in Mike’s mouth
  25. Second Guy Sucks on Mike’s dick, gets him hard as a rock
  26. Mike forced to suck on First Guy’s dick
  27. First Guy cums in Mike’s face
  28. Guys hold Mike down as Charlie forces his legs in the air
  29. Charlie fucks Mike
  30. First guy has Mike sitting on him as he fucks him
  31. Second guy bends Mike over back of chair to fuck him
  32. Mike collapsed on floor, drenched in cum, guys standing over him, dicks dripping
  33. Charlie and guys carry Mike to shower
    1. water pours over his gorgeous body
    1. hands wash him with cloth
    1. fingers pinch at his nips
    1. guys fondle his dick
    1. Charlie sucks on his dick
    1. First Guy fondles his balls
    1. Second guy fingers his asshole
    1. Mike cums, explodes, over and over and over…
  34. Guys help Mike dress in fresh clothes, he’s shaken
  35. Charlie gives Mike full baggie of pot
  36. Charlie shows Mike photo of gorgeous tight end teammate
  37. Charlie gives Mike card like roommate gave him
  38. Mike looks at Charlie
  39. Mike and Charlie kiss
  40. Mike leaves, smiling

So…which style would be best?

A
B
C

Focus…part 3

I followed him out, signaled to my pack, and we grabbed him…

He fought us, but five against one is no contest…

We dragged him into an empty bar, tied him down…and soon our night was on fire…

And despite his screams and curses, so was his…

Focus…part 1

Y’know, prison ruins you for women. Yeah, they’re fun to fuck…but once you know a man’s ass is tighter than a woman’s pussy and he’ll fight you as you take him instead of cry and plead, you find that when you cum it’s like you never have, before. It makes you blind, for a second.

That’s why, when I saw this guy in the locker room at the gym changing into his workout gear, I called my old cellmates and sent them this photo…

Turned out they were as horny as me, so we agreed to take him for a ride, after he was done at the gym….

The Mormon…

When he came a-knockin’…with somethin’ he was hawkin’…

I saw his bod was rockin’, so brought him in for tea…

That’s when I bound and gagged him. Then he knew this was no whim…

For even though he’s quite dim, he’s exactly right for me…

Pleasure…

You’re gonna be ours, tonight, no matter how hard you fight…

We’ll use you in so many ways, and keep you for so many days…

And once we are totally done, we’ll let you back out in the sun…

Because when there’s beauty like yours, we want to make sure there’s encores.

Natural progression

There are reasons why this…

…should lead to this…

…and then to this…

Guys just need to be shown what they truly want — to be used and brought to nirvana in the finest way possible. Once they’ve experienced it, they’ll come back for more. I should know; I’ve tested the theory more than once.